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  Posted: August 06, 2006 05:46 pm  
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"Who is he? Why would I...?"

Basically kinda like Evangelion.
Evangelion's awesome, xD

Also kinda an AGENT corp.
But.
Different.

Also kinda like Lost Planet.
Anyway. Onto the plot.

CORPORATION:

Basically, it's kinda like Evangelion in the Nerv and Mobile Suit respect.
No one really knows what the corp does, no one knows where the robots came from.
The Robots resemble human qualities very, very much. but have a robotic-kinda face.

It's for a "peace-keeping organization", is the projected use for the corporation, but it's obvious you don't need giant robots for peace-keeping effects.
The Pioneering of Space is just beginning, and the Robots are being mass-produced in two models.
G [ground] and S [space]

RESISTANCE:

Basically, there's a group of "Agents", you can call them what you want, that are selected to fight these robots.
Mechs.
Whatever.

Because the people who aren't part of the Corporation are quite aware that something's going to happen soon, because of the mass-production of these robots.
Also, these pilots are top-priority.
No one's really sure why, but the "sabotagers" are administered drugs, for "security reasons."
No one's really sure where the drugs, or the people[sabotagers] came from, either.
Also, none of the people who work for the Resistance knows anything about the people at the top. The "top brass" or whatever.

The rebels/anti-corp group can also be named anything you want, they use mostly fighter aircraft, and ship-artillery.
They have some attack-sattelites, but they're really nothing compared to those Robots.

T.T does that make any sense at all?
I'm starting to lose myself.

But let's press on!

PILOTS:
The Robot-pilots are almost like Akira, where they have some abiltiy over some things beyond their reach.
Almost phychic powers, but just beyond their reach.
They use these "powers" to tune in with the "heartbeat" of the robots, name still unknown >_>;
Gosh.
I suck at names, eh? XD

Every pilot carries a personal firearm, and a knife. For "personal protection" because the corp is quite aware that someone's going to want to stop them.
Space is a big place. Enemies can come from anywhere, huh?

REASON:

The "space project" is more of a "Home construction" at this point, the "space homes" or colonies, whatever you wanna call them, are still being built, wtih the help of the Robot S Class.
The G Class helps to keep the people regulated on the gorund, all around the world.
The G class and the S class is both under the UN control, to give people a "new home space". Almost along the Gundam storylines.
But no war. Yet. o.O
The UN uses the G class as kind of a "police force" to crush anything that gets in the Corporation's way.
The UN owns the Corp, but doesn't admit to it.
They say it's a "return of service". They pay the corp, they get Robots.
but, of course, they own the thing >_>;
The Resistance knows this, but really has no way to prove it. They think that maybe assassinating some of the pilots would bring this out.
But, of course, everything's gonna explode in their face xDDD

A little foreshadowing there xD.
If you want, I'll write out what I'm thinking in like story form.

This post has been edited by Lloyd Ikari on August 06, 2006 07:58 pm


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The Good God said, "Good day to you, brother."
The Evil God made no answer.
And the Good God said, "You are in a bad humour today."
"Yes," said the Evil God, "for of late I have been often mistaken for you, called by your name, and treated as if I were you, and it ill-pleases me."
And the Good God said, "But I too have been mistaken for you and called by your name."
The Evil God walked away cursing the stupidity of man.

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Posted: August 06, 2006 05:57 pm  
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makes....semi normal sense...but.....yeah....semi normal sense...you might wanna refrase it and it'd sound better..

i think you sorta distracted me by mentioning other things..like the drugs and sidearms when you didnt really need to mention those in as much a detail so it'd keep me lessed confizzled biggrin.gif
 
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Posted: August 06, 2006 05:58 pm  
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xD It just kinda poured out.
I shall refine it later.
AFter I get my head clear o.O


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The Good God and the Evil God met on the mountain top.
The Good God said, "Good day to you, brother."
The Evil God made no answer.
And the Good God said, "You are in a bad humour today."
"Yes," said the Evil God, "for of late I have been often mistaken for you, called by your name, and treated as if I were you, and it ill-pleases me."
And the Good God said, "But I too have been mistaken for you and called by your name."
The Evil God walked away cursing the stupidity of man.

Limit? What "Limit"?! You have no idea what I'm capable of! ~Kazuma, s-CRY-ed
 
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Posted: August 07, 2006 01:40 am  
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ahh...i have EVA.
anywho.we havent made a manga yet....this idea should be saved for later.


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Posted: August 07, 2006 08:46 pm  
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that sounds like a really good idea!
(believe it or not i didnt get lost!)
you put in a lot thought on thus huh?
the drugs and guns and stuff!
i have a robot with human like qualities!!!
we could use her as one o the baddies!
 
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Posted: August 07, 2006 11:59 pm  
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"Have EVA"? You mean "hate EVA"?
[shrugs] I'm probably going to draw it myself...I've already started a little bit.

:-) Someone DIDN'T get lost.
Amazing.
Well, I'm glad my reordering worked <_<; xD
Anywho.
I did put a lot of thought. Technically.
Does 2 minutes count?
It just kinda came and came and came and came..
And it's actually quite a big conspiracy...


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The Good God and the Evil God met on the mountain top.
The Good God said, "Good day to you, brother."
The Evil God made no answer.
And the Good God said, "You are in a bad humour today."
"Yes," said the Evil God, "for of late I have been often mistaken for you, called by your name, and treated as if I were you, and it ill-pleases me."
And the Good God said, "But I too have been mistaken for you and called by your name."
The Evil God walked away cursing the stupidity of man.

Limit? What "Limit"?! You have no idea what I'm capable of! ~Kazuma, s-CRY-ed
 
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Posted: August 08, 2006 12:21 am  
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i dont quite understand. cuz im not really clear on the story from the beginning... the resistance is the "AGENT"s right?
and the ppl doing all the big bad robot stuff is the badguys???


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  Posted: August 08, 2006 01:45 am  
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Well, we can't change the basic plot because it has already been written, but we will save this for future ideas to the manga. tongue.gif
 
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Posted: August 08, 2006 04:01 am  
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QUOTE (Lloyd Ikari @ August 07, 2006 06:59 pm)
"Have EVA"? You mean "hate EVA"?
[shrugs] I'm probably going to draw it myself...I've already started a little bit.

:-) Someone DIDN'T get lost.
Amazing.
Well, I'm glad my reordering worked <_<; xD
Anywho.
I did put a lot of thought. Technically.
Does 2 minutes count?
It just kinda came and came and came and came..
And it's actually quite a big conspiracy...

thats what i meant,,,stoopid typo


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Posted: August 09, 2006 12:18 am  
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QUOTE (darkbullet777 @ August 07, 2006 07:21 pm)
"i dont quite understand. cuz im not really clear on the story from the beginning... the resistance is the "AGENT"s right?
and the ppl doing all the big bad robot stuff is the badguys???"-darkbullet777

"Well, we can't change the basic plot because it has already been written, but we will save this for future ideas to the manga."-xXpunkgothluvXx

"that's what I meant. Stupid typo"-Tenshikeki

Umm, no.
the Agents are the UN pilots.
You can't see things in black and white, as "good and bad"
You have to see it from a realistic view.
The world is not white and black, good and evil. It's a lot more complicated than that.

Let me tell you something interesting.

The Drugs that they give to the Resistance.
Give people the phychic powers that the UN pilots have.

Now, how would that happen?
That the resistance have the means, but the end comes out at the UN?

Anywho.
I wasn't saying this as a mainstream "you gotsta do this now" kinda thing.
It was just an idea
XD I inspired myself.

Yes, typos suck.
How can you hate NGE?


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The Good God and the Evil God met on the mountain top.
The Good God said, "Good day to you, brother."
The Evil God made no answer.
And the Good God said, "You are in a bad humour today."
"Yes," said the Evil God, "for of late I have been often mistaken for you, called by your name, and treated as if I were you, and it ill-pleases me."
And the Good God said, "But I too have been mistaken for you and called by your name."
The Evil God walked away cursing the stupidity of man.

Limit? What "Limit"?! You have no idea what I'm capable of! ~Kazuma, s-CRY-ed
 
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Posted: August 09, 2006 07:16 am  
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QUOTE (Lloyd Ikari @ August 08, 2006 07:18 pm)

Umm, no.
the Agents are the UN pilots.
You can't see things in black and white, as "good and bad"
You have to see it from a realistic view.
The world is not white and black, good and evil. It's a lot more complicated than that.

Let me tell you something interesting.

The Drugs that they give to the Resistance.
Give people the phychic powers that the UN pilots have.

Now, how would that happen?
That the resistance have the means, but the end comes out at the UN?


ah huh... mmm okays i .....kinda understand.... i think ^.^


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Posted: August 09, 2006 04:54 pm  
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xD Don't feel bad.
It's supposed to be confusing.


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The Good God and the Evil God met on the mountain top.
The Good God said, "Good day to you, brother."
The Evil God made no answer.
And the Good God said, "You are in a bad humour today."
"Yes," said the Evil God, "for of late I have been often mistaken for you, called by your name, and treated as if I were you, and it ill-pleases me."
And the Good God said, "But I too have been mistaken for you and called by your name."
The Evil God walked away cursing the stupidity of man.

Limit? What "Limit"?! You have no idea what I'm capable of! ~Kazuma, s-CRY-ed
 
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